you did something i -love- [to do as well as read] with
"Paralyzed senses,

Blood runs ghostly,

The soul is frozen

Indecision mounts,..."

short, to the point, simply amazing... ^_^ great, great poem! ^.^

~Winter~

This was very...intense. Really powerful in kind of a scary way; interesting. Your word choice was nice again, I like it.

You haven't posted anything for awhile so it was nice to see something new. Right...onto the review.

This poem was just great. You really portrayed and was able to define guilt very well. I know what it feels like to feel guilty and you did a good job in this poem. I especially loved the last line. It was blunt and short, but I really liked it.

Coco Puffs!
-Sapphire