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| hypa to hell and back 2008-07-15 ch 5,  | abusereally good but you might have to go through it and check it as there are loads of letters missing and it really confused me some times but besides those its really good cant wait for the next up date ^_^ |
| hypa to hell and back 2008-04-11 ch 4, | abusea good ferw mistakes and a couple of sentences didnt makes snese but besides that it was really goos. ive missed this one alot and im glad your back :D |
| black ennui 2008-04-10 ch 4, | abusei didn't expect them to confess that early on in the story... but let's just see what pops up next. :) good first few chapters, keep updating! =D |
| hypa to hell and back 2008-01-12 ch 3, | abuseahh ok slap me cyber punch me what ever but this is the third time i have read this and still i havent reviewed so im taking the time to do it now... wow i love it you gota update again please and make it soon i really want to know what is happening really i do so please update if you have got the next chapter sorted out or some thing |
| mysticfox19 2007-12-11 ch 3, | abuseI know how she feels about the whole rain thing. I just got home from my 3:30 final and it just started pouring on my way from the bus stop. Interesting so far, keep up the good work! |
| MelGrl 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseIt sounds interesting, but it was a little short. Can't wait to read the rest, so please update soon! |
| maximusrexmundi 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. It seems like there should be more from what you say in the summary, but I leave that to you ;) I like the conversational way you add new information to the story. Many of the stories I read seem to drop information at your feet, and it doesnt always feel like it fits. Here I can tell you put time (or at least effort) into what you were writing. All in all, the word is keep it up and good work =) |