|Reviews for One Big Damn Mistake|
| Nonya Soum 8/13/07 . chapter 1
The emotion seems to pour out or maybe I'm just crazy. Again, I might be crazy, but the last lines sound like they could be in a song (maybe the whole poem). Songs are basically poetry... The first lines are especially cool. Great job!
| tearing hands 8/11/07 . chapter 1
I love how you ended the poem in a dash. It made me imagine a person walking away.
| Chidori Nadare 8/10/07 . chapter 1
Very different, for a change. I like the first stanza a lot. Good work!
| a silenced revolution 8/8/07 . chapter 1
I really like it, for a change. I especially love the last two lines of the third stanza. Beautiful work as always.