The emotion seems to pour out or maybe I'm just crazy. Again, I might be crazy, but the last lines sound like they could be in a song (maybe the whole poem). Songs are basically poetry... The first lines are especially cool. Great job!

Write on!

I love how you ended the poem in a dash. It made me imagine a person walking away.

Very different, for a change. I like the first stanza a lot. Good work!

-C.N

I really like it, for a change. I especially love the last two lines of the third stanza. Beautiful work as always.