'Time Renversement Devices'?
and abingdon, eh? ^^;; wondered about the setting because they have japanese names although fylingate sounds definitely english.
didnt really get the story, but maybe it's just me.

I just loved this. It did have a bit of Harry Potter, but with that futuristic approach. I loved that! I love types of anime/mangas like this; with pilots and futuristic worlds. I've never heard of the anime you mentioned. I assume it is good? :] Your writing style is amazing. You're talented and creative. Keep going!

I love that anime and your story as well! Very well-written. I hope that, if you have the time you'll check out some of my works as well.