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Redd 2007-08-11 . chapter 1
YAY! I loved it, of course, but I've all ready said that. Nice choice of titles, I can't wait to see the next chapter!
ShyFoxie 2007-08-08 . chapter 1
You're a pretty good writer, and this is an interesting world you've created, but I was wondering why every dimension only seems to have one world. You also sometimes describe a bit much, but just a bit. You don't really need to say that the blade can cut away a soul if you show it doing precisely that two paragraphs later.
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