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ZOMBOID32Disco 2007-08-29 . chapter 8
dangit you're beating me! I need to write more haha but I'm so lazy. I loved this, it was crazy insane or insanely crazy!
Fairyworld1217 2007-08-28 . chapter 8
This chapter wasn't as bad as you said it was. Also it's spelled alzheimer's, not el timer's. Just to let you know for future reference.

keep it up!! :)
Blade-Storm-Hurricane 2007-08-23 . chapter 7
WHYY! It was so sad and yet you torcher me more with a cliffhanger! Haven't I suffered through enough cliffhangers?!?!? GR stupid mike! That's sad, because Riley died thinking that Andy hated her, why did they have to fight?!??!? WHY! Andy and Riley are kind of like us but we don't tackle each other when were mad at each other... And we didn't die...Good chapter hurry up with the next one!
Fairyworld1217 2007-08-22 . chapter 7
oh my gosh what a sad way to end the chapter!! keep it going!
ZOMBOID32Disco 2007-08-21 . chapter 3
DUDE I LOVE THIS!! haha Joey *nudge* remember THOSE good ol' days?!

I haven't finished reading yet but I HAD to review when I finished chapter 3.

John the trainer is a badass! he reminds me of Zoe so much...shes thrown stuff at me before =[ haha but she'd probably help me punch rachel

DUDE rachel SUCKS IT...like for real. that whole event reminded me of the time when I got "spoken" to...hahah and I cried a lot.

lol I love you though, this story makes me happy because I can feel all the little bits of you in it and it makes me squiggle(hhaha remember that?)

Blade-Storm-Hurricane 2007-08-21 . chapter 6
NO YOU SON OF A B*! What happened?!?!? Why do you torture me with cliffhangers!??!?!?! GR Type now! Tell manda what happens, tell me! Did any other slaughter horses follow them home? Are they going to becoem a rescue ranch? And who the hell is there?!?!? Is it mike?!?!? TELL ME! WRITE NOW!
Fairyworld1217 2007-08-20 . chapter 5
I love it! It keeps me at the edge of my seat at the Mike parts and stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Blade-Storm-Hurricane 2007-08-19 . chapter 5
You have a sick sense of hummor my friend, "We had a long night," lol, but anyways, I liked it, I think it was a good way to end the chapter! Keep writing! I like the name Bullet Bull too, it sounds cool
Blade-Storm-Hurricane 2007-08-16 . chapter 4
NO! Everything was perfect until you gave me a cliffhanger! YOU BEEP! GR What happens to Joey? Does he EVER WAKE UP! and what happened to Riley's cast?!?!?!? Gosh quit forgetting about it lol! Anyways, good chapter! Extremely long but good! My eyes are bleeding!
Blade-Storm-Hurricane 2007-08-14 . chapter 3
Yay what a lovely chapter! I think it was even longer then the last one! Riley is so cute around Adam and Joey is the perfect guy! There must be something he's hiding! lol, anyways, Mike is a dick head! Thats right I said it! The poem you wrote was good though! You should send that to someone on valentines day... how about that Erica girl! That was her name right... anyways, awesome chapter, I'm so happy that your going to finish this story!
Blade-Storm-Hurricane 2007-08-10 . chapter 2
AW I love Joey so much! lol, anyways, I'm loving it, your plot line is great, I'm so proud! You worked your own experiences into the story, and Rachel is such a **! I don't know if I'm allowed to say that on here but jeez! Poor horsey... I feel more sorry for it then angry, you should save the poor horsey! lol and Riley is random... "You should try these fries!" lol random but funny! Update soon, I can already tell that your going to finish this story!
MONKIY 2007-08-08 . chapter 1
Awesome. This story just proves that girls kick butt when it comes to, well, everything. lol. girls rock. this story rox. your writing style rox. my sister is obsessed with horses so i picked some things up from her. he he. otherwise i would be clueless on the simplest terms. he he. i can't wait for the next chapter. ur story is really interesting so far. yay. Update soon.
MONKIY
ps. Mikes a jerk! he he. (Or is he. i just won't know til you update so. again UPDATE)
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Blade-Storm-Hurricane 2007-08-08 . chapter 1
Yay! A chapter! I already read it before you posted it up but I decided to review anyway! Good chapter, I'll review for EVERY SINGLE ONE OF THEM! muwhahaha! Yeah... well anyways... good story! Make sure to finish this one! GR
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