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| For What Its Worth 2007-08-15 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. However, you may want to go through the entire chapter again. There are numerous spelling errors, as well as the odd grammatical one. The story as narrated by Malik is very intriguing. I especially loved the description of Kaide! LOL I look forward to the next chapter! :) |