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| Stahlut 2008-02-19 ch 2,  | abusethis story is really awesome, i loved every minute of reading it. i cannot wait to read more. |
| For What Its Worth 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseA very intriguing beginning. I think I will like this one. However, when he first awakes, I believe you mean to say his eyes Shot open? The 's' is missing. And perhaps you should tell us what is so startling about his eyes? ^^ And why she did not register them when they shot open? |