Sorry, sorry, sorry! I didn't mean to take so long to review. I had read this when I had had a smidgen of time, but never managed to leave a review. But here I am :)

I can't get over how well this story is put together. It reads so smoothly, and it's so intriguing. The ending was no exception. I loved it. It was perfect.

I hope to see more from you soon!

Carm

Yay! I love happy endings, and I especially love this one. So cute!

Good job on writing a great story!

No no no no no no no no no no no no no NO!

She can't die!

This isn't gonna be like Romeo and Juliet where they both die, is it?

Update please!

Gahiji died? What? No

I hope Eberia doesn't die!

Update soon, please

I love the very last sentence.

Whoa.

Garai was his friend back on Habibah, right?

The wait was definitely worth it, great chapter!

Update when you can please!

Angels

The Eyes on the other side of the Lifeworld

Architects of the Convert

Fallen

Restless

The Convert hath betrayed them

The Angels await

for a Redeemer

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Aw... I love your story. Great job.

Once again, marvelous. The only thing I would advise is EDIT! EDIT! EDIT! By edit, I mean typos. It's really going to bother me.

Kat

Wo!

You updated! D

Anyhoo, awesome chapter! It was really cute.

I wanna read more!

This story keeps amazing me with each new chapter. Every time I think something is going to happen, something completely different occurs. I love that.

Even though I've got absolutely nada free time during the week, or the weekends for that matter, I'll still try my best to read your new chapters soon. Promise :)

Carm

This is an amazing story! It's really well written, and there's a lot of description! It was a great plot, and you've developed it well. You're 12? Wow.

Thanks for asking me to check this out!

I can't wait for another update!

Aww poor Eberia!

Aww!

Eberia is his true love!

*gasps* She's a demon?

Ooh, how will Dakari act?