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| Carmel March 2007-10-06 ch 14,  | abuseSorry, sorry, sorry! I didn't mean to take so long to review. I had read this when I had had a smidgen of time, but never managed to leave a review. But here I am :) I can't get over how well this story is put together. It reads so smoothly, and it's so intriguing. The ending was no exception. I loved it. It was perfect. I hope to see more from you soon! ~Carm~ |
| starlit x sky 2007-10-05 ch 14, | abuseYay! I love happy endings, and I especially love this one. So cute! Good job on writing a great story! |
| starlit x sky 2007-10-04 ch 13, | abuseNo no no no no no no no no no no no no NO! She can't die! This isn't gonna be like Romeo and Juliet where they both die, is it? Update please!! |
| starlit x sky 2007-10-02 ch 12, | abuseGahiji died? What? No I hope Eberia doesn't die!! Update soon, please |
| BeautifulSin 2007-10-01 ch 12, | abuseI love the very last sentence. |
| starlit x sky 2007-10-01 ch 11, | abuseWhoa. Garai was his friend back on Habibah, right? The wait was definitely worth it, great chapter! Update when you can please! |
| Cryptic Secrecy 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseAngels The Eyes on the other side of the Lifeworld Architects of the Convert Fallen Restless The Convert hath betrayed them The Angels await for a Redeemer ǧ |
| Luna Turner 2007-09-09 ch 9, | abuseAw... I love your story. Great job. |
| Luna Turner 2007-09-09 ch 2, | abuseOnce again, marvelous. The only thing I would advise is EDIT! EDIT! EDIT! By edit, I mean typos. It's really going to bother me. ~Kat |
| starlit x sky 2007-09-07 ch 10, | abuseWo! You updated! =D Anyhoo, awesome chapter! It was really cute. I wanna read more! |
| Carmel March 2007-09-07 ch 10, | abuseThis story keeps amazing me with each new chapter. Every time I think something is going to happen, something completely different occurs. I love that. Even though I've got absolutely nada free time during the week, or the weekends for that matter, I'll still try my best to read your new chapters soon. Promise :) ~Carm~ |
| starlit x sky 2007-08-24 ch 9, | abuseThis is an amazing story! It's really well written, and there's a lot of description! It was a great plot, and you've developed it well. You're 12? Wow. Thanks for asking me to check this out! I can't wait for another update! |
| starlit x sky 2007-08-24 ch 8, | abuseAww poor Eberia! |
| starlit x sky 2007-08-24 ch 7, | abuseAww! Eberia is his true love! |
| starlit x sky 2007-08-24 ch 6, | abuse*gasps* She's a demon? Ooh, how will Dakari act?? |