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| Casey Drake 2008-01-07 ch 12,  | abuseYAY!! -thunderous applause- I liked that you let Opal make that crack about you. And I liked the ending. Yet another amazing chronicle from this world of yours. Over and out, :) CD |
| Casey Drake 2007-12-10 ch 10, | abuseMan I missed this story... and these characters. *laughing* :D CD |
| La. 2007-11-21 ch 10, anon. | abuseI love Nat. It makes me incredibly happy to have him play such a common part in this story. :) Thank you for bringing him back. Also, I love getting to see a bit into the lives of this particular family. A fan of your stories always, La. |
| Casey Drake 2007-10-01 ch 8, | abuseAt this point, I'd like to reiterate how much i love Nat and Derrick. Thank you. In any case... Sweet. While the breakdown was unexpected, I like the chapter. :) CD |
| Casey Drake 2007-09-16 ch 7, | abuseWell, Guanxi is interesting. I think I like him. And... Derrick rocks as always. Seriously. :) CD |
| Casey Drake 2007-08-27 ch 6, | abuseNat always ends up with a Mr. Wrong, doesn't he? -sigh- I've always kinda felt bad for him. I like the book The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time. I really should re-read it. :) CD |
| Casey Drake 2007-08-27 ch 5, | abuseNathan oh Nathan. Gotta love the vampire who screams when startled. And yes, I do believe Jai and Opal are the perfect mental and spiritual couple. As for physical, time will tell. :) CD |
| Casey Drake 2007-08-27 ch 2, | abuse-snerk- tell me, is Derrick right? |
| FreakierThanThou 2007-08-16 ch 5, | abuseStill neat. I love Jai and how weird both he and Opal are, but they seem to like that about each other. It's cute. Amaranth's jealousy for the sister who was always in her shadow was well-written. (I'm glad my brother and I are good at different things!) I still love their abilities, and the Cretenizer is a great invention. Makes them act like stupid villains! That's really clever. And Dianne and Joy were great characters. Is this a sequel to something? I feel like I'm missing a large part of the story. Keep writing, -Freaky |
| FreakierThanThou 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseNeat, and really interesting. I like the way your characters use their abilities, and their interactions are really realistic. Opal and Amaranth are really great characters, especially speaking telepathically the way they do. I'll review the other chapters as I go. Keep writing, -Freaky |
| SapphireIris 2007-08-16 ch 5, | abuseHow did I know Nat was going to get involved? :) This is really shaping up to be an interesting story... although the title does remind me of Carmen Sandiego... -SapphireIris |