UPDATE!
omgosh is there reincarnation in this story? is that why Jo is so similar to Olive? Huh? When's ch. 3 gonna be posted up? IMHO, why can't Isabella be more like Jo, I actually like Jo, lol.

i liked it
but the page is an eyeful
kinda hard to keep my consentration
but good

Cool. So he had a fiance? Again, cool. I like that you do both of thier POV's. It adds depth to the story. Can't wait to read more. UPDATE SOON!

Loved it! The characters are cool, Jolene reminds me of me with the supernatural book obsession. This was a really great first chapter. I'm surprised I'm the only one to review so far. Noah is a vamp, right? I can't wait to read more! UPDATE SOON! (like I'm one to talk right?) =:3 )