CELESTIAL*VISIONARY
2007-08-15
ch 1,  | abuseI'm empassive on that one. One thing I just realized though: in some of my poems I am guilty of not using punctuation, and can understand that when it's just fragments and the sorts, but you had some sentences in that and I couldn't tell where one thought began and another ended. It kinda makes it confusing, or just harder to understand cause you gotta take the extra time to separate it in your head (or I do anyway, I'm easily confused). Anyway, Keep writing, Dana. Constance |
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