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| Gecko Face Eater 2007-08-09 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice! Very short, but powerful, and I like it that way. As Shadow of Ever said, I too have the feeling that there is a cliffhanger. Keep it up. -- Gecko -- |
| Julius Gillian 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseSuccinct and well written. But I feel there's a cliffhanger, and I feel the 'wanting' for more. |
| The Furtive Oubliette 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseIt is simple and well put together, actually. Though I certainly do not agree with your views (I do walk by people in need and I couldn't care less) I have to say that your poem is very good. ^_^ Cynically Yours, T.F.O. The Furtive Oubliette P.S. Keep up the good work ^_^ |