It's so sad that he lost so much. Great ending. I'm looking forward to more. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Revenge. Violence. Romance. What more can be in an action story? Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Sorry for taking so long to R&R. Migraines plus the computer do not mix. Nice work. Have a great day.

~Twilight Starr~

This doesn't sound good for Damijin. At least, Rose's dad was concerned for her safety. I wonder what will happen with the reunion takes place. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Interesting chapter. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Great, action filled chapter. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Wow. Adopted father. Everything seems to be connected. I'm interested in seeing what happens next. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

I can't believe he's been captured. It appears that Rose is alive. Perhaps she'll save him. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

I think it's a good sign that he cares about her. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

I like the third option line. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Wow. VIOLENCE. I almost feel sorry for the guy.

~Twilight Starr~

Oh, blackmail. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Joiless! That is fantastic and explains a lot. Lovely twist. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Well, that doesn't sound good for Spade. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Rose sounds like she would be a good ally for him at this point and probably girlfriend material. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~