Hey, this is the one you did for fair, isn't it! Well, I read it again and liked it just as much as I did the first time! Simply smashing! ^_~ (sorry, had a sudden urge to use British compliments.)

I loved the ending!

The suspense! I'll have to read the rest later, but so far it's cool!

Jakara is cool. I also like the name Kitari. It sounds so pretty. Love the story so far!

I love the idea of the story. It's very creative. I'll have to read the rest!

^.^