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Spuriously-WoodsWorth 2007-08-21 . chapter 1
Explain, please. Geeze, you impress me too much...
gn0sis 2007-08-12 . chapter 1
Good work again. I only have a few suggestions you might consider: screwed up is vernacular and usually not used in poetry, on line two its should be it's, on line four your should be you're. I really liked the line "purring a lullaby" :)
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