thank you for posting again. It lights up my day and I so did miss your tales this summer.

Nothing like a good forshadowing story. I'm fond of forshadowing, since I do it a lot in my own works. This was a very cute piece indeed. Good luck with getting reviews, it certainly needs more.

Also, if you have the time, perhaps you can check out some of my works. You don't have to, it's just something I usually ask. After all, being an author you tend to try and make yourself known. ^_^

The foreshadowing is awesome!

Cinder thinks Briar Rose is the epitome of feminity, maybe one day he'll be interested in Arachne's bosom, will he ever see William again . . . and in general it's simply cute. ^_^

Livi