I really like this one too. 'Specailly the chours. Nice write.

Rowan.

This piece, especially the chorus part was a bit angst-y. I like the way you composed it. I'm just not sure if free-verse is alright with this piece. Nevertheless, good work!

Erinn~

I like the chorus part, I can relate. I feel like it would have come together better as a piece if your verses rhymed.