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| rosieroo 2008-05-31 ch 12,  | abusenoo! cliffie! plz update soon!! IM BEGGING YOU! |
| thatsmyname 2008-04-13 ch 12, | abuseStay away from which one? I'm guessing that it's Alec but I dunno. It could be Chase (is that Klyndon's name, cause i think it is...) And it took you FRIGGIN FOREVER to come out with this chapter! WHY? HURY WITH THE NEXT ONE! |
| ContemplativeJoyce 2008-04-09 ch 12, | abuseExcellent =DD Update soonerr :]] |
| centenarian 2008-04-05 ch 12, | abuseaw, that's it? I want more! It's funny and entertaining. Please update soon. I'll be waiting. |
| Crazy Wynona 2008-04-04 ch 12, | abuseGreat plot! I love how there are THREE guys now, instead of TWO! HAHAHA. Update soon! |
| ISleep 2008-04-03 ch 12, | abuseI cried a little bit in the inside... you should've kept going because I cried... a little bit in the inside. Just so you know. Tears of saddness rolled down my face... in the inside. |
| starzdestiny 2008-04-03 ch 12, | abusewow, pretty cute. update soon! |
| victoria 2008-04-02 ch 12, anon. | abuseyay!XD that was so cute! |
| Alexa'sAppleTree 2008-04-02 ch 12, | abuseomfgomfgomfgomfgomfgomfg lalsafsacd!1 Another chapter finally lol. You just made me happy =] And man oh man, I can't wait for the chapter when Riley ells Chris about what happened. UPDATE SOON! ~ You're story is totally awesome! I love it =] |
| superficialSagacity 2008-04-02 ch 11, | abuseok, this review is for ch 12... anyways, is Carson going to be involved in the story, or is he just going to become a friend?? |
| superficialSagacity 2008-04-02 ch 12, | abusewhen will she tell him...*sigh* he HAS changed, I'm sure...so she shouldn't really keep a grudge but then again, he did humiliate her so badly and I love kitchen scenes... that was really really great! :D hahahahha...That was so funny...the watermelon thing..hahahahha |
| Kbelle1 2008-04-02 ch 12, | abuseGreat story. Pls update soon!! |
| koerle 2008-04-02 ch 12, | abuseWhat a cute story! I think she has reason enough to be very ** off at Klyndon. But I guess she's going to tell him soon what's bothering her. What an evil cliff, btw! |
| adnama3121 2008-04-02 ch 12, | abuseWoo! Next chapter, but you're throwing another guy into the miz aren't you? If you do that, what would it be called, a love square? lol I actually don't know what to say, lol, it was long, but not eventful enough for me to rant on and on incessantly for about half a page, so I'm going to quit here. ~Amanda~ |
| S. Cherise 2008-04-02 ch 12, anon. | abusethat note's gotta be from Christina... she's just the type. I like Carson a lot- Chris is still too insensitive at times, though otherwise awesome, and Alec's a jerk. I vote CARSON! |