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SirScott 2008-08-02 ch 18,	abuseIt's nice to see that someone besides a white person being a bigot. Maybe, Seth should buck up and be a man, either tell his father to stick it or dump Virginia. ~SirScott
wolfblood82 2008-08-01 ch 18,	abuseHeya there! It's me again. Anyway, I'll cramp two chapters into one review. Hope you don't mind. Ok, first things first, I suspect a conspiracy at work when I saw Seth is going to Japan. And the fact that Virginia was invited over for dinner just serves to strengthen that aspect. I'm very sure there will be fireworks later on given the fact that Seth's mom is a ** and his dad is nothing more than a racist pig. Anyway, I thought that maybe you can do a scene in the hospital just portray the stress that Virginia is facing. Well, one thing for sure is that I'll be looking forward to what you've got to offer next given the ending of this chapter. It did look very interesting. On a side note, I'll be going nuts with joy if I can wedgie people like Seth's parents. No doubt about that. If you don't know what a wedgie is, I suggest you watch the Mask cartoon although I'm very sure the series is extinct now and you'll have to search for that online. Anyway, good to review this one again. Hope to see you update soon! ^^ Bye! :)
SirScott 2008-07-19 ch 17,	abuseIt looks like Seth is going to Japan, unless he grows a backbone and stands up to his old man. Good update. ~SirScott
Mosaic Stains 2008-07-16 ch 14,	abuseInteresting beginning... I felt like 'were we in the middle of a conversation left off?' Like how the hell did we did to ** and reading doesn't work? I swear every person in the world has to either have one weird or unethical friend. I was blessed with both type of friends just as Seth was... Only his is in one friend alone, which makes it worse... I don't have much else to say about the second part of the chapter except it was about time he called her.
Mosaic Stains 2008-07-16 ch 13,	abuseThis chapter's not so bad... ;) It's kind of messed up that Seth wasn't able to make it to her family gathering, but Virginia disappointedly accepting it makes it better. Had that been any other women the inivitation alone would have been a test. Him not showing would have expressed exactly where their relationship was and how it could've of been. Oh well. Lucky they have reached the basis of deciding they don't have a relationship... As for his part... Eli didn't turn out to be so bad and ironically was in a similar cirmcumstance as Seth. Or the circumstance he will be in when his father finds out he's involved with a black dominican girl.
Mosaic Stains 2008-07-15 ch 12,	abuseOkay, I'm back... So to start with Obvious Oblivion: The chapter itself was pretty much funny. Well, that is the conversation coming from Jermey's half was. Personally, I think Seth's biggest problem with his relationship with Virginia is that (1) she isn't pressuring him into one. This can be pretty odd for him since almost everyone he knows (except Willie) is trying to get him to do something he really doesn't want to do-- in a way, I guess, because it's something he wouldn't mind getting pressured into, that's what makes it odd to him. And (2) the other thing is he's the type of guy who gets involved with a girl knowing the relationship will progress into a committed relationship. With Virginia... that doesn't seem to be the case and uncertainity is running the muck. I think you said something to that effect. Yet, even though, he doesn't mind not being committed completely it bothers him because of its oddity. Now, I have to totally agree with Jermey when it comes to it being a big difference when the girl keeps coming back and not the other way around. But considering Seth has no clue where Virginia lives and she has yet to show him... that pretty much shows several different elements... On a furthering note to the chapter, I saw a few sentences that came off uncomfortable. To move on now to this chapter, Honest Boundries: I thought the first half was interesting. Like Virginia, I can't stand catty women... It's bad enough I don't get along great with women, but catty women... I stand like that, to put it bluntly. Dina being one just fits perfectly. In a funny way, I get this image of a light brunnette haired chick, with a soft, but sharp like porcelain face. If not someone with blonde hair... I know, sounds like I'm steroptyping, but that's the image wish you'd have described her... In fact, I wish you'd have described several things, like how Virginia looked. When it comes to the second half... I felt like you'd taken my circumstance with my parents and pasted it right up here. God! I can relate to Seth's situation of his father only calling when he needed or wanted him to do something... I think I saw in a couple of your reviews that they wished Seth would stand up to his dad, but they have no idea that saying and doing are two different things. Especially when you are taught respect above all is important... It's like a military drill... "Home training!" "Loyalty, Respect, and Honor!" All that jazz... You understand! lol! No matter what it's hard to suddenly say "Hey dad, I do what I'm supposed to. Give me some space and respect me..." Are you ' crazy would be calm the outcome... ^_^ / @.* is the other... Get the point?!... ... Anyway, no news is good news in those sort of cases... and I think it's funny that Virginia is like pouring flour on fire; a cooling and relaxing factor for Seth. I guess she's something good for him in the long run of things. That is if you plan on having them stay together? ~Mosaic
Mosaic Stains 2008-07-14 ch 10,	abuseMan, this review is long overdue. It's like everytime I read your chapters, I wouldn't be able to review you due to something, then I'd find you updated. I guess I can say I'm here now. Finally. After so long... Well, to get to commenting on the chapter. In an overall manner, the chapter's pretty much okay. It shows the closed bridge between Seth and Virginia and ends that stupid, odd sexual tension that always develops within a romance. So with that out of the way, I wonder what will happen between the two. I already know some things take place with his parents and her family from reading the other chaps, which was bound to happen. But after all of that, what? I guess I'll have to wait and see... You know what I had to say about mistakes so, I don't think I need to let you know. That'd be redundant and stupid. Until my next review... ~Mosaic And don't update yet.. I know you! {That came off real omnious... lol}
SirScott 2008-07-12 ch 16,	abuseAs much of a bigot that Seth's father is I'm surprised he would eat at a french place. Since he cares about his son's relationships, you can't say he concerns himself with business only. His character seems to overshadow Virginia and Seth's part in your story. I hope Willie doesn't seat Virginia away from Seth. I looked forward to reading more. ~SirScott
wolfblood82 2008-07-04 ch 16,	abuseWow, never knew you would update so fast. Anyway, I can see that this chapter's got a bit of wtf factor here when Seth introduced Virginia. Anyway, not much humor in this chapter, but it did more than enough to portray the underlying tensions here. And I wonder what was with Seth's dad. Is he a racist? Or maybe he's just some random dick I guess. But I'll say that it's good to see Seth standing up to his dad for once. Now the main issue bugging me is what kind of underhand stunt Seth's dad will try to pull out in the future. Screwed up people always have some kind of twisted determination. Yeah I know I'm watching too many dramas here. :D And yeah, the irony of the ending sentence is well done as well. :) P.S: Just put up a new story. Guess you should have received the alert by now. Just be warned that the prologue got tons of f words in it. Apart from that, hope to see your review for it soon. Bye! :)
Terry 2008-07-04 ch 16, anon.	abuse"The last thing he needed was to regret something that he truly wouldn’t regret" Well it keeps getting better and better doesn't it? Seth lashes back at his dad, Willie sneaking hugs and feels on Virginia, and that story about this fight with "Joshua". I like how his dad started talking about finding out if the "baby" is his and taking it away. Pretty funny cause I think really it drives home his character. Anyway I'm tuned. Terrance Riverdarb
wolfblood82 2008-06-30 ch 15,	abuseWell, nothing much to complain here. Good chapter overall. Jorga seems like a cute little bugger isn't she? Speaking of kids, my cousin's son is two years old now and that same cousin is expecting another one. :) And yeah, guess Seth's into a major case of screwed up parents, huh? Interesting to see how that will play out. The final part on Seth's mom is a bit abrupt though. I got caught unaware by it in a sense that I thought she would go like wtf at seeing a woman in her son's apartment. Guess maybe you need to do a bit of explaining on this part in the future chapters. But all in all, nothing much serious. Anyway, glad to see this updated. Bye! :)
SirScott 2008-06-29 ch 15,	abuseWe finally get to meet Seth's father. He seems like a jerk and his mother is a ding bat. I was just waiting for Frank to call Seth a meathead. The part with the three year old was cute. ~SirScott
Terry 2008-06-29 ch 15, anon.	abuseHah I really hope Virginia freaks out about it. I really hope Virginia put that woman, and her snobby husband in their place.
SirScott 2008-06-23 ch 14,	abuseWe all need filler chapters, I guess. A magazine does help a lot in the bathroom. Bathroom time is pretty boring. Seth and Virginia do lead modern lives, it's hard to see how anyone gets together in these crazy times. ~SirScott
wolfblood82 2008-06-18 ch 14,	abuseWell, yeah. This chapter's a filler alright. But tbh, I don't have any issues with fillers on the whole unless they're done in a crappy way like the first Naruto anime series. :S Anyway, that was a humorous talk between Seth and Jeremy. The talk about Jeremy's doctor is still rining in my mind lol! XD On the other hand, I don't think the talk between Seth and Virginia don't really make as much impression. But if anything, I guess this could be a link to the future plot. I don't know tbh. And yeah, am I right to say that the ending of this chapter is a major LOL? :D P.S: I'll try to review your final update tomorrow or so. Euro match between Russia and Sweden is starting soon again. On a side note, I think it will be a draw, but possible Russia might nick it lol! :D

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