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| sunshower 2007-08-11 ch 1,  | abuseWow, I'm amazed. Very Lord of the Ring'sy, which I was especially thinking of as I have been reading the book you gave me for my birthday today (finally! after having to finish Hamlet, and that other boring RE book). Anyway, the rhyme was so beautiful, reading this made me feel as though I was floating in a gentle sea. The expression and description was so vivid I felt transported to a different plain. I'd say this is definitely one of the best you've ever written. |
| kloun mannequin 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abusethe imagery is nice with strings of melancholy. |