|Reviews for The Doll in the Grass|
| r.p. ann 4/16/13 . chapter 1
Okay, I couldn't log in into my account because my phone is sh*tty.
That was hella cute.
Also, it reminded me of The Castle of the White Cat. (I don't know if I got the title right cause I read the tale in Spanish so I just translated the title).
Loved it, wanna fave but can't at the moment, but I will once I get on my laptop hehe.
Also, loved your writing style.
| Its all the same 12/12/12 . chapter 1
AWWW I liked it! it was verry cute
| Dark Angel's Blue Fire 9/16/12 . chapter 1
Loved the story thanks for sharing x
| Cindy 8/29/12 . chapter 1
I found this little tale to be nice and cute. I even had myself saying a little "awe" at the end. :)
| AnonymousReviewer 6/26/12 . chapter 1
The ending made me laugh. :) Loved it!
| Mimi Chase 02 6/20/12 . chapter 1
I remember this tale! ... Somewhat... But the ending to both this and the original was heart-warming, touching, and (for your story) scandalishly funny. I like how the doll was amusing and Espin was content with his choices. I'll look for your other stories on Amazon and plz continue writing!
| metacognitive 5/28/12 . chapter 1
Aha! His final words are honestly the best. Great story :)
| Psycho Teddy Bear 4/29/12 . chapter 1
I really love it.
I mean, I'm in love with fairy tales ( why? don't ask, 'cause I don't know ), and also, I'm in love with Slash stories. So, again, I really love it.
And, yeah, I'm gonna read your other stories in Amazon
| k4k 1/22/12 . chapter 1
likey! I like classic stories like this. I have copied it for my future children... ;)
| why-eye-en 11/6/11 . chapter 1
hahahah this is awesome!
| kitty3 9/5/11 . chapter 1
that is messed up...but in a very good way :) i liked it
| Rainee 7/17/11 . chapter 1
I've always loved fairy tales and really liked this one. It's sweet. :)
| prolific thought 6/7/11 . chapter 1
This was cute story, it put a smile on my face!
Definitely a fav! So, you know...keep writing!
| liriah 6/1/11 . chapter 1
I loved it! It's really well written, and that doll was so funny..
| Lotus-Hua 3/2/11 . chapter 1
What a sweet and cute story. I loved your characters, especially Espin and the doll/man. Made me smile. :-)