Okay, I couldn't log in into my account because my phone is sh*tty.

That was hella cute.
Also, it reminded me of The Castle of the White Cat. (I don't know if I got the title right cause I read the tale in Spanish so I just translated the title).
Loved it, wanna fave but can't at the moment, but I will once I get on my laptop hehe.

Also, loved your writing style.

AWWW I liked it! it was verry cute

Loved the story thanks for sharing x

I found this little tale to be nice and cute. I even had myself saying a little "awe" at the end. :)

The ending made me laugh. :) Loved it!

I remember this tale! ... Somewhat... But the ending to both this and the original was heart-warming, touching, and (for your story) scandalishly funny. I like how the doll was amusing and Espin was content with his choices. I'll look for your other stories on Amazon and plz continue writing!

Aha! His final words are honestly the best. Great story :)

I really love it.

I mean, I'm in love with fairy tales ( why? don't ask, 'cause I don't know ), and also, I'm in love with Slash stories. So, again, I really love it.

And, yeah, I'm gonna read your other stories in Amazon

likey! I like classic stories like this. I have copied it for my future children... ;)

hahahah this is awesome!

that is messed up...but in a very good way :) i liked it

I've always loved fairy tales and really liked this one. It's sweet. :)

OMG, YES.

This was cute story, it put a smile on my face!

Definitely a fav! So, you know...keep writing!

*grin*

I loved it! It's really well written, and that doll was so funny..

What a sweet and cute story. I loved your characters, especially Espin and the doll/man. Made me smile. :-)