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piratesbabe123 2009-11-18 . chapter 1
XD I loved it! Especially the ending!
Nicole 2009-11-16 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed your story! It really sounded like a fairytale! It was well written, entertaining, and quite humourous. I felt the ending was a little bit rushed. I would have liked to heard just a little bit more on how the courts reacted to the doll turning into a full grown man, and maybe a bit more on the curse. Other than that, I absolutely loved it! Hm, think I'll read another one of your stories now =]
Htaed is Death backwards 2009-09-16 . chapter 1
XD i like it!
Pyroangelus 2009-08-01 . chapter 1
Very cute slashy fairy tale. I love that only Espin sees the value in the things he brings home. Though he should probably practice his archery. Once he's done examining his new bride's size...
Darsh 2009-07-28 . chapter 1
I keep feeling like my childhood wouldn't be complete without this! Thanks a bunch!
XoLuluoX 2009-06-15 . chapter 1
you are welcome, i enjoyed reading it. now write a sequal !
Blue Papillon 2009-06-14 . chapter 1
Very cute. Worth reading. Loved the way that the doll turned into a man at the end. And finding out how much bigger he is now!! Lol, so clever. I love the way that you've made fairytails modern AND slashy! loved it.
Lunatikk 2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Amazing, I loved it! It was really fun to read. Thank you for writing this!
Lotsa E-Chocolates, And hoping you make more stories like this one,
~Lunatikk!
Kidiu Anaji 2009-05-11 . chapter 1
Ah, wow! Was this based on a story? It's sounds alot like something from the Grimm Brothers.

Anyway, nicely done.
frogs of war 2009-05-10 . chapter 1
That was funny. I like the doll's personality and that his gifts were not perfect in the eyes of the court (White Cat, etc.), even if they were to Espin.
eros494 2009-04-15 . chapter 1
Hahaha. This is a very cute story. Great job!
SilverGreen98 2009-04-08 . chapter 1
SO cute! ;D
madlodger 2009-04-05 . chapter 1
This is a cutest fairytale ever!
Taisi 2009-03-29 . chapter 1
What an awesome fairytale! It's kinda new age, while still keeping with old traditions. xD Love it~ And Not-Doll rocks, he made me laugh.
Pelirroja 2009-03-18 . chapter 1
This was absolutely wonderful, dear. I just stumbled on it on the slash search and fell in love. Great job. ^_^
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