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Bi-curious George
2008-07-20
ch 1,
abuseHahaha!! I thought this was super-sweet to the extreme. Was it a play on that princess and the frog fairytale?

Anywho, I loved it. It was fluffy, and with the hallmarks of a good fable.

Loved it ^^.
kasey
2008-07-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseLOL cute! I laughed so hard at the, "Perhaps we should go and figure out how much bigger?” he asked, scandalizing the court, his brothers and his father, as he dragged his pretty not-doll away." I sure wasn't expecting a closing line like that. How funny!

Great story, the thing I like about your story is that you don't get too caught up in descriptions, keeping it simple. That always annoys me about stories...;3 Keep up the great work!
dsf
2008-07-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseholy crap that was good. and original. superb work!
Dark Emo Shadow
2008-06-26
ch 1,
abusehahahaha lol so sweet, is that an actual fairy tale or one you made up yourself because it is awfully good! both the story and the way you wrote it!
hauntful yay
2008-05-30
ch 1,
abuseHAHAHAHAHAHA-- Yes. Go pretty man-dolls!
Narkkasu
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuseHooray for the wonderful fairytale ^.^ It was very much luv. *squeeglomp*
Sychaeus
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abuseso, i don't have much to say, i just figured that seeing as i faved it, i ought to review and express my love for this.
So, yay! love!
-Sy
apricot_nectar
2008-03-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was cute, hilarious, and just made my day. :D Thanks!
Mistress of Apple Pie
2008-03-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is a very cute story with a touch of humor in it. =)
I liked it a lot and the rest of your other one-shots that I became very fond to =P

Absolutely amazing!
Renae K
2008-03-13
ch 1,
abuseI never did review this. Not sure why... I LOVE IT! Pure and simple. Lovely work. You should be very proud. :D
Lucifer's Retarded Twin Sis...
2008-03-11
ch 1,
abusefun fun!~
Imagined Insanity
2008-03-02
ch 1,
abuse*snickers*
very nice.
great job...
i resign myself to idol worship. ah well.
Daydream Nation
2008-03-02
ch 1,
abuseAdorable. And quite epic.
gummybaby
2008-02-29
ch 1,
abusethat was absolutely adorable. thanks for posting it!
Dorkie
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abuseThat was really cute!
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