This is so good I almost can't breathe. I can't even describe to you. You're a very very talented author and I hope to see your name on the books in the stores I go to someday soon. A million kudos.

Absolutely adoring your story so far. Very good grammer, pacing, plot, and dialogue. You're one of my favorites :)

Spectacular. If I could fill this window with nothing but hearts, I would do it.

AW. This is so good!! The sex is great and the romance even better . . . I love the way you describe things as well. I can't wait to see where you're going with this.

I hope you continue to write this, but take your time; don't feel like you need to rush on anyone's account! I love how it's playing out so far; keep it up! :D

hi! i really like this story!

Love, me

(WIll you please read my friend's and my story? It is called
Jerina Adannah Forever. Our joint pen name is Mari and Lani
Adventurekateers. It is really random.)

Great chapter, as usual! :D I hope you continue to update! (Haha, more than I do...! lol)

I like your Jason character too. I actually like how real he is already. Most people in dark situations either turn to God fully or turn away quickly, and the laughing in the face (i think that was the prior chapte -my excuse for not reviewing is that i just kept wanting to read more- was a very real reaction most people would do when another person would mention praying. he's also real in the way that you made sure he didnt open up way to quickly, you keep him a little held back, but you give him the excuse of letting Micah continue following him around because he beleives tht Micah isnt going to give up. I like realism clearly. : )

i just rememberd that in i think...norse? or...some english folklore that i cant seem to remember, maybe its celtic. idk. but Loki is a night god of mischief. i just thought that ironic. : )
YAY FOR GOOD COOKING

im still sad.
: (

...what...
: (
im sad now.
very sad.
and i officially hate jeeps

I very much adore the way you describe things. You have a gentle way of making things seem more alive and more visual. I'm very interested in seeing where this story goes!

Great job! This story only gets better, and I can't wait for an update! :D

YES! I seem to have been waiting forever to read the update on this...(Then again, my timing system is a wee bit off...)

I do hope you update again, and the emotion you convey is wonderful! :D

this is a very interesting and intense story! i like the different story flows that u emply, both at the beginning, the interim and the following chapters. keep up the great work, i can't wait to see more!