Well done. The numbered words took a bit to get used to, but I got pulled in none the less.

Again, I'm floored. I can't say that enough. It's the most beautiful cliche isn't it, to dream about someone for years and years, only to find out that they were dreaming about you too? If only...

It's a cliche, and you do it so well. Love.

Woah... this was really cool.

I like the way it was structured as well as the use of the glass walls, shadows and such. Nicely done :)!

-Nub

Wow. I am blown away. This is an amazing story. Wherever did you come up with the concept/idea for it? I especially like parts #32-34 because of the feelings they evoke for me.

you i love. i just found one of your stories last night [crash] and have since gone through and read most of your other slashy one-shots. i love your style- it's captivating and so spare, but still very expressive. your boys make me smile. you also do the misunderstanding/unrequited love thing rather well, which are a couple of my favorite devices.

sorry i didn't take the time to comment on all of your stories [sandcastles is my current favorite] but i couldn't log in. just know that i loved them all! and i'm adding you to my alerts list, just so you know! i'll settle in and read solitude&synergy when i have a bit more time to spare. sorry for the novel-like review. i get a little over-enthusiastic sometimes. ^^;

Beautiful

Yay. I love these word collection-ish things that you do. :D

This is really cute. I like the emotion you put into this and the way you described everything with such little words and details. It was great. I especially liked number fifty :P When they finally got together ^^

--Striped (Previously CaramelBoost)

;_; so pretty... loved it :)