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Reviews For: What Happens Next?

chrisnardie
2007-09-11
ch 1,
abusewahahaha...
um...1.5
lolz ^-^
Melissa Norvell
2007-08-17
ch 1,
abuseAn interesting little one shot you have here. As a shounen-ai writer myself I must say that you've done a wonderful job on making a short story that didn't have a loopholes.

I'm envious of short-story writers because I can never seem to produce a story that's under 10 chapters, let alone a single chapter in itself. I always want to characterize and it makes for more chapters. ^^;

Ah, the pains of being an author...

Anyhow, good work on an amazing piece. I also have a shounen-ai series called Sacrifice. It may be something you're interested in.
AnimeAngelRiku
2007-08-17
ch 1,
abuseGod, I loved it!
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