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ho ho ho three men in a row 2007-09-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseSo Cameron thought he could fix all of his assholish attitude today by talking to me for the first time in weeks. So needlessly to say, I'm pissed. So, our conversation went like this: Cameron: Hey! What's up? Me: Eh, not a whole lot. I'm loaded with homework because I've been gone for so long. Me: Is there something you wanted? I know we don't exactly like each other... Cameron: What?! No, I like you just fine...Where did you go? Me: Then why in the hell did you try to convince people that I'm a bitch to Layton and that he's my rebound guy? Cameron: Hey Russell is the one that started the rebound guy. [Lying fucking asshole. Russell doesn't talk shit] Cameron: And the reason I called you a bitch is because that's all you ever are to me [I wonder fucking why after he lead me on] and you're mean to Layton sometimes. Cameron: But I didn't come here to argue. I'm just seeing what's up. [Then blah blah blah, a little small talk. 10 minutes later...] Me: Hmm, question. Why in the hell are you bothering to talk to me if you think I'm a bitch. Seems pretty pointless... Cameron: You're not, but most of the time you were. Maybe not. [I think he just contradicted himself] Me: Yeah, so isn't it's pointless to even try again... Cameron: It just bothered me though when you bitched me out after I wrecked my car. [Dumbass, I tried being nice, you pulled the I shoulda died bullshit...] Cameron: And the reason I'm talking to you again is because you're one of my best friend's girlfriend and if we're ever going to hang out, we need to get along. [Oh please, he acts like nothing is wrong between us face to face anyway, what's the difference?] Needless to say, that was the end of our conversation except for me telling him that if he really wanted to get along, I needed to stop talking to him. So I did. Haha. Oh, and it's not my fault you're outta the loop. It's yours ho! And continue means fucking continue. That complete bullshit doesn't mean a thing. That character was golden and you blew it. Blew it big time buddy. I did to get to see Zeb. I saw the real thing! I've met the real thing! I've touched the real thing! Duh. Have fun with your supernatural account. Oh, join the ficathon this time! So you know you gotta get it done. I actually won best Humor. Wow, and I'm not even funny. Yeah man. I'm rocking... Haha I saw the original Hairspray, I wanted to see the new one, but my friends went without me because I was with Layton. Bitches. We saw Superbad like the next day though. Psh. School is just an excuse. Quit using them. It makes me think you don't love me anymore... I can't have that. You might end up as the person locked in the courtyard... Kay, so I gotta go do some homework and maybe work on a story. CRAZY idea, I know. Hey, for the new ficathon, should I use Male Code for the next ficathon?
controv3rsyxx 2007-08-10 ch 1,	abusei like it. it's.. different, but i enjoyed the style and the way this oneshot played out. nice one.
ahhhhhh, oh i mean hello 2007-08-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was good for once. Haha. No, it was. The inner thoughts sorta reminded me of you're my addiction, only this has both people, so it's better. Hmm, while you're off gallavanting with bushwhackers, my life is going to shit. A good friend of mine told me he liked me, so i said we'd give it a shot, only i don't think I can take it anymore. He's constantly trying to talk to me, he wants to hang out everyday, and he's all like 'if you call zac, i won't be mad, but i'll be upset' I'm like, fine, whatever. I can't deal with this. I think I only said yes because I didn't want to hurt him, only I don't think this is going to last longer than a week because I'm going crazy. I thought i liked him, only I'm not too positive. I think more about zac than I do with him. At least with zac, it'll be nothing serious because he's going back to college soon, and he has a motorcycle. I'm shallow. I know. I don't think I can like him as more than a friend. I need to tell him that, but ha. I'm a wimp. Anyway, you should get on today so I can complain to you. And you can laugh at my idiocies. So bye you simpleton. And that's a good thing. For now.
S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G. 2007-08-10 ch 1,	abuseI've had this review box open for a while now. Not too long, maybe fifteen minutes, but I can't bring myself to what I'm supposed to say on this story. I loved it. I loved every part of it, I loved the parts in parentheses, I loved the parts not, I loved your writing style, I loved the storyline, I loved the ending, I loved everything. It was beautiful and eloquent. It was sad and chilling. It had a certain thing about it that made it simply amazing. Good job.

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