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| Bottled 2007-08-14 ch 1,  | abuseIt's really very good, well-written and expressed but I don't understand why she has to break up with him... |
| D-Scyther 2007-08-12 ch 1, | abusePersonally, I don't know what it would feel like when I was in her shoes... I've no experience but based from the way you wrote it, I think I might have an idea now. ^^ Simply delivered, powerfully received. Nice job Dannie~ ^^ - D-Scyther / Sekira-chan / Byron. ^o~V |
| Sarah Allie 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuse*wipes away tear* dude, that was AMAZING! gd job:D |