lovely imagery

I really like this, especially the first line. There's some really nice imagery in here. Well done!

This makes me want to go to a coffee house and listen to bad poetry. Not saying this is bad, I really like, it's just...I dunno what I'm trying to say anymore. I want coffee. And WHERE THE HELL ARE MY REVIEWS, **?!

I like it.

Can't believe it's been over two years since I ended up on this site..

The rhyme is quite good, doesn't jar like alot of rhyme does.

Man, I can't even think of anything else to say.. but it is good.. I like it.

ugh.

Inspiration is gone. I blame calculus.