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| Moonlite Star 2007-08-10 ch 1,  | abuseI think this song would go very nicely with a piano instrumental in the background. I really like it though. The emotions are very strong. |
| kloun doll 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abusewell, I can feel the desperation, my favorite lines are "I’m so scared and nervous These dreams are so real" and "I didn’t want to say I goodbye But I didn’t want to stay" it would be interesting to have a violin in the background. |