Very good! It's nice to see such a fervent heart for God in fictionpress! I loved the preachy style that cuts to the heart and confronts many issues we all deal with. Congratulations on a magnificent piece!

With utmost sincerety,

remaining Amari

so true...
I love the way this was written, especially the lines,
"Therefore, I say again, my heart greatly rejoices in the Lord."
I can, now, live my days following your lead, your footsteps, your guidance..."
This is def. one of my favorites.

God bless,
FIREBRAVE