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| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-11-04 ch 9,  | abuseNo! This is too much suspense for me to hold! Please make the next book soon! > |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-11-02 ch 8, | abuseWow, hated that last cliffhanger. |
| soojinyeh 2007-11-01 ch 3, | abuseThis is nominated for a 2007 Fiction Award for Most Intricate Plot/Concept. For more info, please go to my forums. |
| Dr. Dreyyy 2007-10-07 ch 2, | abuseI have to be brutally honost: this story sucks. It has very little continuity and the characters are very poorly developed. It is also rather unrealistici; it's hard to imagine it actually happening. The storyline is the only part that is at least somewhat decent, but even that is stereotypical and rather delphic, as it is really hard to follow due to the storie's horrendous grammatical and structural flaws. If this is one of your first stories, I suggest to keep on writing and reading more. Everyone's first few stories suck. However, if you are over the age of eighteen and have been writing frequently and actually think that this story is really something, then I suggest you think of a new hobby. |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-10-06 ch 7, | abuseWhat the?! Hey, what happened to Roxi?! Great chapter, by the way. |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-09-18 ch 6, | abuseGood thing, JACE IS ALIVE! -jumps around like a moron- Bad thing, ROXI'S POWERS ARE GONE! (Yeah, I point out the obvious) Great chapter! ^^ |
| soojinyeh 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat murder mystery.Love it. Review me please. |
| Cryptic Secrecy 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseMurder Sadness has darkened over the prospect of murder and now the Rainmaker is trapped in an everlasting algorithm of murder and sadness... Pass the Realm ǧ |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-09-12 ch 5, | abuseWow. that was preetty crepy/ |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-09-07 ch 4, | abuseGlad you continued! Wow, poor Roxi. |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-08-14 ch 3, | abuseThat was amazing. Poor Roxi; seeing Jace telling her she killed him. T_T |
| u Know i am verii sexiii 2007-08-12 ch 1, | abuseyes i do have a myspace y? we should tottaly go out here is da link- http://profile. |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-08-11 ch 2, | abuseI curse your suspense again. Please update soon. |
| u Know i am verii sexiii 2007-08-11 ch 2, | abuseomg dis story is soo awsome omg i love it all most at much as i love you! we gotta chyll soon babe :] |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseYay! You finally did it! Please update soon! |