So...sad. And intriguing. And so wonderfully well-written! After reading, I just can't help but wonder about everything that could have happened. Just a tempting taste into a curious world. Lovely job.

This is absolutely beautiful, it reads like poetry. Even though there's so much mystery to them, I feel like I know the characters personally. Amazing work, you have a lot of talent. Keep writing.

This is really cute and emotional, I like how you went in-depth on Jayce's character with so few words. It was short, but straight to the point - you went immediatly to the heart of the plot, and it suited this oneshot really well. I liked it; good job.

--Striped.