I like this.. the first stanza was great and I love the whole ida of real in your heart.. thats awesome..

Such complete description of incompleteness...

As long as a piece survives, anything scattered can be saved.

Beautiful. I tried to pick little lines out to show how much I like the entire thing, but once again I just couldn't pick one. Great poem! Have I mentioned I adore your writing style? Great job!!

Write on!!

Another Fantastic Poem.

your work has moved more from nature to love
that is recently, of course
this has a beautiful touch

wow, very moving.
The imagery was like watching a movie... very picturesque. The first stanza pretty much matches what I've said, and it fits in well with the others. Like love that's lost but still intact. Keep writing :)

love this- i like the context of it, the images it brings up, and the paranthesis. Great idea for a poem.

;-) sunny

Aww, this is sweet! The imagery that comes with reading the poem is amazing

Beautiful. My sister and I had an interesting conversation about love this evening. It will always be something to ponder and reflect, thoughts to breath and grow upon. Wonderful write. I especially thought the first stanza was well written. Keep writing, k.

Beautiful.. :3

Made me sad, though.

nice poem! and nice ending too, quite smooth ^^