| Reviews for scattered |
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simpleplan13 10/24/07 . chapter 1I like this.. the first stanza was great and I love the whole ida of real in your heart.. thats awesome.. |
Charity F 8/19/07 . chapter 1Such complete description of incompleteness... |
Nonya Soum 8/13/07 . chapter 1As long as a piece survives, anything scattered can be saved. Beautiful. I tried to pick little lines out to show how much I like the entire thing, but once again I just couldn't pick one. Great poem! Have I mentioned I adore your writing style? Great job! Write on! |
Stella Grimshaw 8/12/07 . chapter 1Another Fantastic Poem. |
Aquafied 8/10/07 . chapter 1your work has moved more from nature to love that is recently, of course this has a beautiful touch |
S. Ben Beach 8/10/07 . chapter 1wow, very moving. The imagery was like watching a movie... very picturesque. The first stanza pretty much matches what I've said, and it fits in well with the others. Like love that's lost but still intact. Keep writing :) |
heresyisforlosers 8/10/07 . chapter 1love this- i like the context of it, the images it brings up, and the paranthesis. Great idea for a poem. ;-) sunny |
cherz 8/10/07 . chapter 1 Aww, this is sweet! The imagery that comes with reading the poem is amazing |
The Postscript 8/10/07 . chapter 1Beautiful. My sister and I had an interesting conversation about love this evening. It will always be something to ponder and reflect, thoughts to breath and grow upon. Wonderful write. I especially thought the first stanza was well written. Keep writing, k. |
Ritsu 8/10/07 . chapter 1 Beautiful.. :3 Made me sad, though. |
Kenken 8/10/07 . chapter 1 nice poem! and nice ending too, quite smooth |