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| simpleplan13 2007-10-24 ch 1,  | abuseI like this.. the first stanza was great and I love the whole ida of real in your heart.. thats awesome.. |
| Charity F 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseSuch complete description of incompleteness... |
| Nonya Soum 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseAs long as a piece survives, anything scattered can be saved. Beautiful. I tried to pick little lines out to show how much I like the entire thing, but once again I just couldn't pick one. Great poem! Have I mentioned I adore your writing style? Great job!! Write on!! |
| Stella Grimshaw. 2007-08-12 ch 1, | abuseAnother Fantastic Poem. |
| Aquafied 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseyour work has moved more from nature to love that is recently, of course this has a beautiful touch |
| S. Ben Beach 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abusewow, very moving. The imagery was like watching a movie... very picturesque. The first stanza pretty much matches what I've said, and it fits in well with the others. Like love that's lost but still intact. Keep writing :) |
| heresyisforlosers 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuselove this- i like the context of it, the images it brings up, and the paranthesis. Great idea for a poem. ;-) sunny |
| cherz 2007-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, this is sweet! The imagery that comes with reading the poem is amazing |
| The Postscript 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. My sister and I had an interesting conversation about love this evening. It will always be something to ponder and reflect, thoughts to breath and grow upon. Wonderful write. I especially thought the first stanza was well written. Keep writing, k. |
| Ritsu 2007-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful.. :3 Made me sad, though. |
| Kenken 2007-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abusenice poem! and nice ending too, quite smooth ^^ |