Reviews for The Birthday Cake

xXFinal FallenXx 2007-08-13 ch 1,	abuseThis peom touches a part of me that usually remains dormant during the viewing of poems, and doing so, I have no real problems or suggestions for it, except to make the 2nd stanza wordier if possible.
The Postscript 2007-08-10 ch 1,	abusePlease at least give some form of credit to Shakespeare. An "Inspired by Shakespeare's Macbeth". Yes, it's one little line. But that passage in Macbeth? It's the passage that stands alone ... brilliant, even if stripped of the entirety of the book. It disreputes your own origional work when you fail to properly site. Keep writing. k.