BRILLIANT PLEASE UPDATE SOON :-)

That is so sad! It's really good though!! I LOVE this. It's seriously great. Could you read and review my story? I need input on it and you're a great writer. This is seriously amazing. Great job.

Aww, poor thing. Her grandma's the devil by the way. You're an amazing writer because my heart felt for her, and I felt fat reading this haha. Personally I don't think she'd be that fat at 140 lbs. I'm 5'5'' and I weigh 138 and I'm not fat, but maybe the fact that she's two inches shorter than me makes a difference. Anyway, I'm adding this to my alert list and I hope you update!
Much Love!