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| Kenny's Friend 2007-09-14 ch 1,  | abuseI have no words to prorperly describe this... The action began perfectly, the descriptions were vivid without being over the top, and the characters were easy to "see". I really liked this one. Keep it up "Ken's Friend" |
| Drewfiend 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseI'll have to admit- the first time I started to read this I had to stop midway through. I didn't like it, but I couldn't really think of why I didn't like it. After reading some of your other works, however, I decided to give this one another chance, and it was worth it. Maybe I just wasn't used to your writing style? |
| Otseis Ragnarok 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was ** great! I really don't have anything else to say. Every last word, from beginning to end was pure bliss for me as a reader. The only possible complaint I could have would be at the beginning, when It was difficult to distinguish between speakers, but everything cleared up toward the end. |