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| Kenny's Friend 2007-08-18 ch 1,  | abuseOkay, this is when I put down my pencil... er, keyboard... and never write again. Geeze, if you can captivate and entertain with a one-shot of chess and existentialism... Alright, no complaints here. The characters are great, and I love the countless allusions to historical characters. The dialogue (although colorful) was entertaining, and even their religious views (or rather, lack of them) were interesting. This story is AMAZING, simplistic, thought-provoking, unique. Great job. I stand humbled again, my friend. Good to have you back, by the way. "Ken's Friend" |
| Drewfiend 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseAnother good story! I didn't think it was possible to have that deep a story over a game of chess, but you proved me wrong. Nice historical tidbits, too! |