Wow, that was really good. Really, really good. I am a sucker for two things corny/cheesy books and movies and vampire/werewolf/witch supernatural books, and even if I didn't read the type of book, I'd still love this.

Heather

Also, the Hungarian parts were good, it made it seem more authentic.

Heey, this one seems pretty interesting too, I'll keep reading it and also, the website is, worthy of publishing but no spaces obviously, let me know if you go on there, I find it easier to use than this.

Heather

I like it! Good job.

omgg.
this story...is possibly the best story i've ever read.
the way it's written is absolutley amazing
the way the characters are..is breath taking!
truly a great writer!
i'm interested to see what amazing story i will get to read next!

this is one of those few stories which can actually shock u till the end!!
great plot!!
is dere a sequel i wana read!!
pls leme knw if der is one

That was...sad. I mean, he's dead. Dead dead. Not just vampire dead.

Sorry. You already knew that. I mean, you wrote it. This was a good story. I'm going to read the sequel, if there is one. I hope there is.

An amazing story... :) Good use of English, great plot... Simply amazing... :)

i loved this story i amost cried at the end.

this was pretty good, i'll finish it later.

this was so good...i'm gonna read the sequel now!! great story!

.. oki strike what i just said i just notice u do have a sequal lol ^^

you should totally make a sequeal to this!it would be awsome... like some how Craig lied about the whole condom thing... and that she's like ya... ... but its like later in her life after that like when shes in her 20's and her kid is how ever old they would be... and vincent comes back to the town around that time... just for memories and he sees nicolett at the park with the kid... tho at first he wasnt sure it was her... and so on and so forth... i can come up with good ideas i just cant keep it going~.~ so maybe if you want u can do it ^^

I love your story.. Although during the first part its a little slow, but it was worth it to continue on.

pretty good story.
i liked it =]
=]

Cant wait to read the next one!