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| sicklysnowwhite 2007-12-29 ch 8,  | abuseit was a dragon? a DRAGON was watching her? a DRAGON loves her? rivers help me. haha, but this is GOOD. she's desperately afraid of the thing that loves her. she's finally humanish, in her fear, right? and the forbidden word, is that "dragon" or "noelle"? (rhetorical question) alright wait... let me figure this out... the song. okay the song is about the dragons...? okaay. i'll have to go read it again. this is verry interesting. i love it. lovelovelovelove it. |
| sicklysnowwhite 2007-12-29 ch 7, | abuseo, noelle has a stalker. or an admirer or something. same difference. soo short! depressing... but you've already updated the next, so i'll live. and are we now exploring noelles species? fun. |
| The Intelligent Designer 2007-12-28 ch 8, | abuseHa, I fugured it out half-way throught the chapter! I feel proud! Love the mother...nice execution with that. |
| Unsociably Acceptable 2007-12-27 ch 8, | abusei don't get it! ah! ok, so i'mma try and figure it out...or you could help?! |
| dbz 77 2007-12-18 ch 2, | abuseI must write, these two chapters are very well-written. |
| thinkTwice Nfall 2007-12-17 ch 4, | abuseI'm not done reading yet, but it seems lovely so far. You have great descriptions, and the characters are -- not exactly completely unique per say (no offense) -- but... different in the way you portray them. :) The idea of the rivers being named after the princesses and representing their personalities was also really cool. PS: When you wrote "courier" did you mean "courtier?" |
| sicklysnowwhite 2007-12-07 ch 6, | abuseO, I'm excited!! who will it be... who will it be...? The prince? Christopher? Noelles mother? ooh, exciting exciting! i love the martens, fire breathers, wonderful. and flying pigs! ha! hurry up and post the next!! |
| iglooey 2007-12-06 ch 5, | abuseWow very interesting story. very unique and well thought out. i love your characters because they are so un-stereotypical and original. great plot too. |
| The Intelligent Designer 2007-12-06 ch 6, | abuseO...cool, nice job, and oim excited for you! love the way u wrote oliver's speech, love the name...where's Andy? |
| Unsociably Acceptable 2007-12-06 ch 6, | abusewhy wouldn't i enjoy it? its an awesome story and besides, noelle is awesome! she's so cool! i'm a little side swept with all of that, i'm swallowing so its all go! |
| Unsociably Acceptable 2007-11-24 ch 5, | abuseo the prince is in trouble! hehehehe i like it! |
| sicklysnowwhite 2007-11-21 ch 5, | abusedoes she have control over the forest as well? cool... im excited for a chapter in another POV hope it comes son! |
| January Skies 2007-11-19 ch 5, | abuseNice story! Can't wait for you to continue. Noelles quite an interesting character, I like her already! |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-11-07 ch 5, | abuseI LOVE THIS! UPDATE! |
| The Intelligent Designer 2007-11-07 ch 5, | abuseGood, love the plotting, love the introduction of plot. keep going!! |