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| lynda b 2008-01-05 ch 6,  | abuseoh. uh. wow. she seemed whiney, truthfully, in this chapter. BUT, like you said - shes not perfect. soo, please write more. i want to see her and andrews romance develop :) |
| Kateena 2008-01-01 ch 3, | abuseGreat story so far!! |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2007-12-29 ch 6, | abuseHi! I love this story. :) Interesting indeed. Update a.s.a.p.! |
| not.a.spoiled.brat 2007-12-29 ch 6, | abusewell thats true. but i dont want anything bad like they killed her father. it would be very sad. =[ well i wonder where andrew went...hm. oh u should make one in his p.o.v. think about it. please update soon! |
| lynda b 2007-12-24 ch 5, | abusewrite more; por favor!?!??! |
| not.a.spoiled.brat 2007-12-21 ch 5, | abusewhoa. good chapter if i say so myself. well please update soon. i hope nothing bad happens. happy holidays to u too!! |
| Jenna N 2007-08-28 ch 3, | abusethat was great, update soon. |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abusegreat chapter...i like it so far...cant wait to see what happens next.. |
| Dreamless-Wonder 2007-08-21 ch 3, | abuseThis seems like a very interesting and promising story. Update as soon as you can! Enjoy your summer! ~Kelly~ |
| FireFallon 2007-08-21 ch 3, | abuseReviews are pretty...yes they are...heres one for you ;) anyway update soon I want to know what happens and yest I'm going to go check out your latest story...:) ~Fallon |
| Sing With The Elevator Musi... 2007-08-14 ch 2, | abusethere were a few paragraphs where you put him instead of her and things like that, but other than that its very well written. i'm really enjoying it. It's true, Alexis doesnt seem to have much depth to her and she's a little perfect. some of her personality is coming out with her fighting with Andrew and everything. i understand it takes time to write a character, its like getting to know someone. we cant understand Alexis in two chapters. i cant wait to read more!! elevator music |
| not.a.spoiled.brat 2007-08-14 ch 2, | abuseyay! u updated!! u know what u should do? u should do a chapter in andrew's point of view!! please? i updated!!? well i liked this chapter.it was really good.and long./well hope u update soon! |
| Sing With The Elevator Musi... 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abusei like it. i cant wait to read more. i didnt think it moved too slowly. i thought it was a good hooker. i wouldnt want to read more if it wasnt. good job. Elevator Music |
| not.a.spoiled.brat 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseaw. i say u still continue this one.well hope u update soon. |
| a bitter kiss. 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseCongrats on posting a new story! It takes a lot of guts to post anything up really, so kudos to you. :D First off, I like the beginning. I didn't find it slow because I could relate to your character. I love Chrismtas, I love the festive feeling you have, you know? I love how it's cold and you just want to put a sweater on and head to the kitchen and yeah... haha. Grr, I want Christmas to come soon. Well, I liked this first chapter. It was pretty smooth. The only thing I have so far is that Alexis seems a little too perfect - but then again, this is the first chapter, so I'm sure you have something to solve that. :D Good luck with the story! :D |