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| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is so true and really expressive. Beautiful imagery usage in the last stanza, in a field of roses with no one to sit with. Lonely and longing for love. Excellent job. ~the Stranger in the moonlight~ |
| Vesta J 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. sudden change, huh? i'll be thinking this soon:"with only words to comfort me, I hope you know you're still part of me-My muse, my life; my love, my pride." :( moving away sucks... -vesta |
| abba12 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseyou have some timing... this really got to me because im going through it at the moment. really emotional letter/poem |