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Reviews For: Field of Roses

the Stranger in the moonlig...
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseThis is so true and really expressive.

Beautiful imagery usage in the last stanza, in a field of roses with no one to sit with. Lonely and longing for love.

Excellent job.

~the Stranger in the moonlight~
Vesta J
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abusebeautiful. sudden change, huh? i'll be thinking this soon:"with only words to comfort me, I hope you know you're still part of me-My muse, my life; my love, my pride." :( moving away sucks...
-vesta
abba12
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseyou have some timing... this really got to me because im going through it at the moment. really emotional letter/poem
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