*Hearts shatter* pretty well written just that one little correction. I realise that is an easy mistake to make since I have several of those in my own poems and I am still trying to figure out how to get in there to correct them.

Haha, dang kid been a while since we both wrote anything, period.

But yes, I know exactly what you're trying to say in this poem. I've been there so many times before. Good luck with everything working out though.

Check out some of mine. I've picked up a bit on the poetry thing myself.

Don't have the patience for short stories anymore. Haha.