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Reviews For: Marry Me Again?
sheeparelove22 2009-09-23 . chapter 1
:'(
that actually made me cry.
Jem the writer 2009-02-13 . chapter 1
oh gosh, this was such a heartfelt, poignant piece!

I loved the paragraph at the beginning "This was forever. We lived, laughed, and loved together. We shared one bed and one body. Now, that we are old and grey, one of the only things we had left was our love for each other. 07/07/70- the day we exchanged our vows, and said "I do", and I forgot it."

Really sad ending. You have such talent :]
Lizzy-Lou 2007-08-11 . chapter 1
That was great. But depressing. Really depressing! You're an amazing writer.
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