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| Crossing the Rubicon 2007-08-12 ch 1,  | abuseI like the details, like Warmth leaving its shoes and Cold stealing food from the pantry. Great poem. |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed all of your detail in this piece; how you made the heat haveits own characterization, like it was it's own person. Your wrighting style is very fresh and light, it was a charming read. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |