Is she his daughter? That creeped me out, and reading it in the middle of midnight is not so much of a good idea. Very different from what is expected in the title and summary. Well done. *adds to faves*

-C.N

That freaked me out too! And I'm sitting in broad daylight. Wow, that story was twisted but also very well written. Nice job!

Love the creepiness - was it his daughter?

creepy. but well written

What a way to end the show!

So, his daughter huh? It's kinda creepy that he keeps her on strings to hold onto to her. Not exactly what I expected when I read the title and summary, but that's a really good thing.

Excellent,
~Ghost

Dolls creep me out anyway, haha. This was very good. Reading it alone in the dark at almost 2:00AM as I did probably wasn't the best idea because it gave me a bit of a chill...which is good, mind you! That means it affected me! Great job, indeed!

wow... this is good... really good actually... Keep up the good work, maybe strech it out alittle... that's all I can suggest!