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Reviews For: Puppet Master

Chidori Nadare
2007-09-07
ch 1,
abuseIs she his daughter? That creeped me out, and reading it in the middle of midnight is not so much of a good idea. Very different from what is expected in the title and summary. Well done. *adds to faves*

-C.N
Jason Maxwell
2007-08-15
ch 1,
abuseThat freaked me out too! And I'm sitting in broad daylight. Wow, that story was twisted but also very well written. Nice job!
Rose Valentine
2007-08-15
ch 1,
abuseLove the creepiness - was it his daughter?
Blue
2007-08-14
ch 1, anon.
abusecreepy. but well written
Ghost in the Dark
2007-08-14
ch 1,
abuseWhat a way to end the show!

So, his daughter huh? It's kinda creepy that he keeps her on strings to hold onto to her. Not exactly what I expected when I read the title and summary, but that's a really good thing.

Excellent,
~Ghost
Kate Marsden
2007-08-13
ch 1,
abuseDolls creep me out anyway, haha. This was very good. Reading it alone in the dark at almost 2:00AM as I did probably wasn't the best idea because it gave me a bit of a chill...which is good, mind you! That means it affected me! Great job, indeed!
n. paige
2007-08-13
ch 1,
abusewow... this is good... really good actually... Keep up the good work, maybe strech it out alittle... that's all I can suggest!
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