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| Chidori Nadare 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseIs she his daughter? That creeped me out, and reading it in the middle of midnight is not so much of a good idea. Very different from what is expected in the title and summary. Well done. *adds to faves* -C.N |
| Jason Maxwell 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseThat freaked me out too! And I'm sitting in broad daylight. Wow, that story was twisted but also very well written. Nice job! |
| Rose Valentine 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseLove the creepiness - was it his daughter? |
| Blue 2007-08-14 ch 1, anon. | abusecreepy. but well written |
| Ghost in the Dark 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseWhat a way to end the show! So, his daughter huh? It's kinda creepy that he keeps her on strings to hold onto to her. Not exactly what I expected when I read the title and summary, but that's a really good thing. Excellent, ~Ghost |
| Kate Marsden 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseDolls creep me out anyway, haha. This was very good. Reading it alone in the dark at almost 2:00AM as I did probably wasn't the best idea because it gave me a bit of a chill...which is good, mind you! That means it affected me! Great job, indeed! |
| n. paige 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abusewow... this is good... really good actually... Keep up the good work, maybe strech it out alittle... that's all I can suggest! |