Interesting stuff you've got here, my friend. I really liked this one. Great job!

Love,

Gem

PS- I know I've been reviewing all of your old stuff lately, and I hope you don't mind!

Falling isn't fun. It's generally the fear of falling literally or metaphorically.

Good poem.

Twilight Starr

I felt like I was walking up the stairs with you as you told the poem. I liked this very much.