Hm... This is a tricky one to decide upon. Though I have trouble wrapping my head around it, I can't help but like the connotation behind it.

I like the words used for this one. Will admit to took me a second read to get it right, but the lasting impression made it for me.

heyy sam its me bay. just sayin you got talent on ur writin! well hope ya make other great storys!

It's not easy to make a haiku portray true emotion and experience. But you've done it. Great job.

p.s. I'm stephen joseph biga, working off a different pen name

Amazing write, again!

Aw, that's fantastic! I love that image of a bubble popping repeatedly. Really nicely worded. And original! Keep writing! :)

This is wonderful, because bubbles, definitely gives the happy feeling, and "popping over and over" shows that it's almost like a brand new feeling every time. Very cute for a haiku!

~Cirien Phoenix

P.S. Thanks for reviewing "Rain Fall Down." I apologize that it's taken me almost a month to return your review! Either way though, I'm very happy that you enjoyed my poem! :D

Nice poem. The was more negative emotions than positive, but that's love.

~SirScott

Interesting concept, however, a haiku is supposed to be 5 sylables and then 7 sylables and then 5 again. Not 5 words, 7 words, and then five again. This one was 8 and then 12 and then 5.

Instead try: Bubble of magic/popping inside my body/With your hand in mine

-Frost

nicely written haikus. works well with each described emotion.

keep writing

Whoops! Didn't realize there was Hate too!
So let me guess, annoying friend? young brother or sister? Parents?
Second Haiku and i understood both! That's an achievement for me!! You've got a real easy way when it comes to reading Haikus which makes it easier to understand.

I'm usually crap at understanding Haikus but I understood this one. Happiness in holding a lover or friend's hand. Nice work