Reviews for Emotionally Defined

Reviews For: Emotionally Defined

find-a-new-way 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseheyy sam its me bay. just sayin you got talent on ur writin! well hope ya make other great storys!
painting andromeda 2007-08-28 ch 1,	abuseIt's not easy to make a haiku portray true emotion and experience. But you've done it. Great job. p.s. I'm stephen joseph biga, working off a different pen name Amazing write, again!
no.peace.los.angeles 2007-08-24 ch 1,	abuseAw, that's fantastic! I love that image of a bubble popping repeatedly. Really nicely worded. And original! Keep writing! :)
Cirien Phoenix 2007-08-14 ch 1,	abuseThis is wonderful, because bubbles, definitely gives the happy feeling, and "popping over and over" shows that it's almost like a brand new feeling every time. Very cute for a haiku! ~Cirien Phoenix P.S. Thanks for reviewing "Rain Fall Down." I apologize that it's taken me almost a month to return your review! Either way though, I'm very happy that you enjoyed my poem! :D
SirScott 2007-08-12 ch 3,	abuseNice poem. The was more negative emotions than positive, but that's love. ~SirScott
Frosthold 2007-08-12 ch 1,	abuseInteresting concept, however, a haiku is supposed to be 5 sylables and then 7 sylables and then 5 again. Not 5 words, 7 words, and then five again. This one was 8 and then 12 and then 5. Instead try: Bubble of magic/popping inside my body/With your hand in mine -Frost
mizu no kokoro 2007-08-12 ch 3,	abusenicely written haikus. works well with each described emotion. keep writing
Alazar-Ramir 2007-08-12 ch 2,	abuseWhoops! Didn't realize there was Hate too! So let me guess, annoying friend? young brother or sister? Parents? Second Haiku and i understood both! That's an achievement for me!! You've got a real easy way when it comes to reading Haikus which makes it easier to understand.
Alazar-Ramir 2007-08-12 ch 1,	abuseI'm usually crap at understanding Haikus but I understood this one. Happiness in holding a lover or friend's hand. Nice work

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