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fatbird33 2007-08-29 . chapter 1
don't we all feel that way sometimes, alhtough i don't think anyone's ever written a poem about it before. good job!
criti-sized 2007-08-20 . chapter 1
Well, I think this counts for more than the poeple that write poems, because reading this poem reminded me of all the troubles I'm having writng my story and how I just wanted to words to form themself.

Anyways, this is a nice poem, I like the creativity that you have in it. Though it doesn sound a bit dry when you reach the part,

"Sighing, I let my shoulders sag,

And wait a few more minutes,

Biting my lip in concentration."

Either way this is going into my favorites just for inspiration when I don't know what to write.
Elizarde Ponce 2007-08-13 . chapter 1
i loved this poem. kudos to you!
Pluto's Rose 2007-08-13 . chapter 1
I really like this poem. ^^ I can really see someone who is purely frustrated by the fact that they can't write a poem. In the poem of course, not you, because this is really good, and I haven't seen a poem like this before.

^^;;

~Pluto's Rose
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