 criti-sized 2007-08-20 . chapter 1Well, I think this counts for more than the poeple that write poems, because reading this poem reminded me of all the troubles I'm having writng my story and how I just wanted to words to form themself.
Anyways, this is a nice poem, I like the creativity that you have in it. Though it doesn sound a bit dry when you reach the part,
"Sighing, I let my shoulders sag,
And wait a few more minutes,
Biting my lip in concentration."
Either way this is going into my favorites just for inspiration when I don't know what to write. |
 Pluto's Rose 2007-08-13 . chapter 1I really like this poem. ^^ I can really see someone who is purely frustrated by the fact that they can't write a poem. In the poem of course, not you, because this is really good, and I haven't seen a poem like this before.
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~Pluto's Rose |