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| AmareAgape 2008-08-05 ch 1,  | abuseHahaha... that so sweet and funny. I luv the last line. Perfect ending ya got right there... |
| wistfulpearl 2008-08-02 ch 1, | abusethis was cute! i liked it :) keep up the good work |
| JamieBell 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseHeh, so funny! Lines so lame and yet so amusing. Great stuff! |
| volleychick89 2008-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuselmao...that was a cute one shot. Now I'm going to read the other stories you have posted, fun fun, lol. |
| Incurable Adoration 2008-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseTo be honest, I think this short story could be extended a bit. Only a little, of course. I like the dialogue between the primary male and female characters. A pretty good job, over all. I do see and like that you went the realistic route and didn't drag things on, making it a boring novel. |
| hippi926840 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abusepossibly the best last words of a romance fic ever in the history of online fiction your mom is lame brilliant |
| Pione 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuse"'Your mom is lame'" HAHA. I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! :D |
| totallypeached 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuselolz ur one shots are cool :) |
| Sam 2008-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like all the one shots of yours that i read so far. Its really lovable and cute, and makes you like be noticed. Like what Esme did took alot of guts, and I think your story will prompt some girls to stand up and be noticed too. Write moar |
| wandless 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI don't think that was a cliche! The idea was sort of cliche, but it wasn't written in a cliche way. Cliche's are more about the way the story is written than what actually happens. I thought it was funny and cute. Good job, you're really talented! |
| luv me like no other 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abusethis had me cracking up so hard "Well, then I think you and I would add up better than a Riemann Sum." |
| minor5chord 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuse"I think you and I would add up better than a Riemann sum"?!??!?!? I had a major spontaneous laughing fit following that line. Which I'm not quite over yet...(laughs again...Riemann sums...lol). That was hilarious. Next he'll be saying "I wish I was your derivative so I could lie tangent to your curves" or something. Oh, math jokes. Needless to say, that was very enjoyable. |
| amleey 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseAww. Everything is so cute. The way she climbed over the other desks to ask for a pen was funny. |
| dreamforever101 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseahaha! not too realistic, its hopelessly cliched, but it is written very nicely :D |
| rainbabie 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseWay too cute! Love the ending. Now that I've discovered you I will be going through all your stories! I hope you keep up with the writing. |