Not the best that I've read but not too bad either. Like what you said, sticking to reality. In reality, there's not much of drama.

Aw...GREAT STORY;)

cool! the character is consistent! i like it.

AWESOME! Esme is so adorable!

I LOVED the ending. haha. Liked the story. Cliche, but I still liked it. Cute.

Cute fluff!

ill tell your mom what i think...jkjk
that was cute :)lols it seemed pretty realistic to me
funny that they lose games and yet everyone loves them :)
anyways that was awesome;]

Aw!! This is very nice! Very very very cute like a kitten!!
Love it, love it, love it!

HAHAHA CUTE!

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"Your mom is lame" Now that line, my deary, was pure genius.

Yes yes, this story was utterly cliche, but I like how they got together when she was trying to get her sister with him. Creative. :)

Loved this! :)
Makes me wish I would have the guts to talk to the cute guy in my Stats class hahaha.

Hahaha... that so sweet and funny. I luv the last line. Perfect ending ya got right there...

this was cute! i liked it :) keep up the good work

Heh, so funny! Lines so lame and yet so amusing. Great stuff!

lmao...that was a cute one shot. Now I'm going to read the other stories you have posted, fun fun, lol.